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    Imafreek

    1. 06/06/2008 3:07pm
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    I just want to know what you think of it so far....

    http://alterego911.deviantart.com/gallery/#ADJL-FanFics

    give your opinions (no flames)

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    AzureSkies

    2. 06/06/2008 3:24pm
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    Very good. I'll recommend it. In character, nicely written, flows with the show's style, could work as a few episodes without drastically changing the feel of the show.
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    Imafreek

    3. 06/06/2008 6:23pm
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    AzureSkies wrote:
    Very good. I'll recommend it. In character, nicely written, flows with the show's style, could work as a few episodes without drastically changing the feel of the show.

    thanks.

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    YFWEyeah

    4. 06/06/2008 6:57pm
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    Imafreek wrote:

    AzureSkies wrote:
    Very good. I'll recommend it. In character, nicely written, flows with the show's style, could work as a few episodes without drastically changing the feel of the show.

    thanks.



    I'll be honest with you: I think it's very quite good, but you've already gotten feedback for it in the fanfiction thread... I'm not sure why you're creating an additional thread for it. I'm not trying to be rude, but it's as if you're constantly wanting to shove the fic into the spotlight. No one else creates threads asking for reviews for their fics.

    Once again, don't take this the wrong way, I like the fic. But you've already got, as I'm sure you know, PLENTY of praise in the other thread! People are basically gonna be saying the same things in here, you know? ^_^ That's all... like I said, it's really quite good. You're doing a wonderful job.
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    Imafreek

    5. 06/07/2008 4:13am
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    YFWEyeah wrote:
    Imafreek wrote:

    AzureSkies wrote:
    Very good. I'll recommend it. In character, nicely written, flows with the show's style, could work as a few episodes without drastically changing the feel of the show.

    thanks.

    I'll be honest with you: I think it's very quite good, but you've already gotten feedback for it in the fanfiction thread... I'm not sure why you're creating an additional thread for it. I'm not trying to be rude, but it's as if you're constantly wanting to shove the fic into the spotlight. No one else creates threads asking for reviews for their fics. Once again, don't take this the wrong way, I like the fic. But you've already got, as I'm sure you know, PLENTY of praise in the other thread! People are basically gonna be saying the same things in here, you know? ^_^ That's all... like I said, it's really quite good. You're doing a wonderful job.

    thanks

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    Prinny_Doood

    6. 06/07/2008 6:37am
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    It's good enough for me to want you to update it, now update it before I say it sucks.
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    Prinny_Doood

    7. 06/07/2008 6:40am
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    Did I mention I like the number 7? Yeah, number seven after the number six like chapter seven after chapter six.
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    FOP_fan17

    8. 06/07/2008 10:41am
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    This is really good! Update soon!
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    Imafreek

    10. 06/07/2008 2:57pm
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    Prinny_Doood wrote:
    Did I mention I like the number 7? Yeah, number seven after the number six like chapter seven after chapter six.

    chapter seven isn't even up yet

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    Imafreek

    11. 06/07/2008 2:58pm
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    DragnUp wrote:
    IF we can't flame, how can we give our OPINION

    I take it that you don't like it

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    Prinny_Doood

    12. 06/07/2008 5:23pm
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    Imafreek wrote:

    Prinny_Doood wrote:
    Did I mention I like the number 7? Yeah, number seven after the number six like chapter seven after chapter six.

    chapter seven isn't even up yet



    Exactly!
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    Imafreek

    13. 06/07/2008 5:35pm
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    Prinny_Doood wrote:
    Imafreek wrote:

    Prinny_Doood wrote:
    Did I mention I like the number 7? Yeah, number seven after the number six like chapter seven after chapter six.

    chapter seven isn't even up yet

    Exactly!

    I get it

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    14. 06/07/2008 6:38pm
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    Imafreek wrote:
    Prinny_Doood wrote:
    Imafreek wrote:

    Prinny_Doood wrote:
    Did I mention I like the number 7? Yeah, number seven after the number six like chapter seven after chapter six.

    chapter seven isn't even up yet

    Exactly!

    I get it



    I hope so. It's been a long time since your last update.
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    Imafreek

    15. 06/08/2008 4:28am
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    luiz4200 wrote:
    Imafreek wrote:
    Prinny_Doood wrote:
    Imafreek wrote:

    Prinny_Doood wrote:
    Did I mention I like the number 7? Yeah, number seven after the number six like chapter seven after chapter six.

    chapter seven isn't even up yet

    Exactly!

    I get it

    I hope so. It's been a long time since your last update.

    I've been busy

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    luiz4200

    16. 06/11/2008 8:44am
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    Imafreek wrote:
    luiz4200 wrote:
    Imafreek wrote:
    Prinny_Doood wrote:
    Imafreek wrote:

    Prinny_Doood wrote:
    Did I mention I like the number 7? Yeah, number seven after the number six like chapter seven after chapter six.

    chapter seven isn't even up yet

    Exactly!

    I get it

    I hope so. It's been a long time since your last update.

    I've been busy



    I understand after all the surprises brought by Chapter 7.
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    Imafreek

    17. 06/11/2008 11:30am
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    You'll probably get more in Chapter 8

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    FOP_fan17

    18. 06/11/2008 4:02pm
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    Chapter 7 WAS surprising! Keep up the good work!
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    Imafreek

    19. 06/12/2008 8:14am
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    FOP_fan17 wrote:
    Chapter 7 WAS surprising! Keep up the good work!

    really? because someone else Kind of saw afew things comming....

    so what surprised you?

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    Imafreek

    20. 06/12/2008 8:18am
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    FOP_fan17 wrote:
    Chapter 7 WAS surprising! Keep up the good work!

    Wait, was that part about the surprises sarcasm?

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