Must say I agree completely with the other negative reviews. I found both Phoebe and Piper completely out of character.
I mean I get being scared of 'unspeakable wrath', but she isn't talking about that at the start anyway, she's just talking about 'breaking rules', and yeah it was a bit out of character.
I found the library scene kind of cute. Cole trying to flirt, and giving him such stupid lines because he hasn't been around for so long was funny. He's charismatic but still a bit out of it.
I don't like that this is the second time that they have denied a darklighter a lover. Yes ok, in this one he was kinda rude about it and put a curse on them. But he didn't actually kill him which I don't get why he didn't do that in the first place. But he dies because he sees them kiss? To me that means he actually loved her .. so who's the real demon here? He just wanted his love, maybe went about it badly and was a creep, but he still cared for her.
I don't get why she had to write 'handfasting', to tell them what it's called, I mean they could've just stood up and looked themselves.
I also found the whole 'eclipse' thing pretty predictable and surprised nobody else figured it out. Especially if you really want the curse broken, surely you would've spent ages trying to figure it out?
And Piper feeling 'sick' when they get to the building... I'm sorry 'when the time is right you'll know' is just a saying. You don't actually get a physical change in your body telling you. And why do you need to do all these things? If this is supposed to be a small affair to keep it a secret, having a florist and dresses and this and that kinda makes it obvious. Have the ceremony small and have an actual wedding later?
Sorry my reviews got so long, but guess this one is shorter. Mostly because I did other things and had it playing in the background. But I thought the couple were pathetically annoying, the death scene was lame, and Phoebe acting weird about the eclipse, looking all confused and feeling weird..