What we hope for and what we get are sometimes two very different things. Unfortunately, it applies to not only the story in this week's episode, but this week's episode as well. It was GOOD, but it could have been GREAT!moreless
7.9
"Good"
USA Network and I have had a very stable relationship for many years. Summer comes and like a summer lover, USA has always been there for me. It provides shows I want to turn the TV on for. Summer may be for the beach and recreation, but at the end of the day for at least a couple of hours a week I have come to expect to be pleasured by USA Network. My network lover has never let me down...until now. I'm feeling a little bit like Raphael, expecting this wonderful, magical night of sex and winding up with a half-eaten cupcake.
In 1987, The Desert Rose Band released an album with the song "One Step Forward." I couldn't help remember this song as I watched this week's episode of "In Plain Sight."
"One step forward and two steps back,
Nobody gets too far like that.
One step forward and two steps back,
This kind of dance can never last."
I want to love this show, but once again Paul Ben-Victor proves himself the bright spot of the hour. He's got this innate happiness inside him that makes every humorous scene he's in twice as good. As for the rest of the cast this week...where do I begin?
We start out with Mary being disgusted because the felon of the week is a con artist. I have to agree with her - I'm not that big a fan of people who make a living stealing other people's life savings. Her "I'm so sick of this" demeanor is a little over the top for me this week.
The next scene that truly disturbed me was Mary at Raphael's house. The entire exchange between the two feels like a post-writer's strike script - something dashed off in a hurry to fill in the four weeks of May sweeps.
Mary thinks she's getting sex. Raphael clearly has something else on his mind. The scene makes no sense. Raphael's lines feel underwritten and Mary's lines seem overwritten, including her "I could barely bring myself to go over there, but what the hey I could stand some good sex before he goes" tantrum when Raphael proposes. I'm going to blame this on a combination of bad writing, bad acting and yes, I'm even going to blame the sound man.
While I could have tolerated the scene, at the end of it the volume on the slur of Spanish that comes out of Raphael's mouth makes it seem like the boom guy was standing right in front of him. Was it edited poorly? Was is so loud because he had to go back in later and re-record that part in a studio and they couldn't match the volume to the rest of the scene?
I get that Mary has commitment issues. Really, I do. The Mary we've been given so far, however, has the depth of a sheet of notebook paper. You can write someone with depth and still allow them their commitment issues. It's what makes us attach to them. It's what makes us HAVE to be in front of our TV sets on the night the show airs instead of letting the DVR catch it.
I felt the story concept regarding the witness they were protecting this week was great! Parts of the rest of the story cleverly pointed out some things that better defined who the characters were. The cast, however, still feels like a floundering mish-mash of attempts to get it right. The most consistent performance of those with the most screen time this week came from guest star Missi Pyle.
Although I hate to say it, Mary McCormack and Frederick Weller were all over the place. Mary went between disinterested to overly-angry to somewhat compassionate to being just a plain jerk. It would be fine if there were a solid foundation of a personality to work with. McCormack (or is it the writing?) seems to leave this behind too often. It feels like she focuses too much on one emotional aspect without remembering it's only a part of the whole.
Frederick Weller on the other hand often feels as though he is not up to the task of matching McCormack's screen presence, rather getting lost in the unsettled family of characters that makes up "In Plain Sight." I felt he was much better last week. Even though he had great opportunities to show us all some boy/girl chemistry with McCormack (staring at her while sitting in the car outside the witness' house, kissing her in the horse stall), his foray into that zone was way too comic relief for me.
When Mary asks him about the kiss, he says it's something guys do in that situation. Great answer, but a REAL guy would have been much more the bronc rider and held Mary in a way that would not allow this kiss he started to be interrupted (small of the back, not the face - he should know by now the face would be way too intimate for her). It would have given his character much more street cred. It didn't have to be a long, passionate kiss - just one definitive in nature. Maybe that's coming, I don't know. I only know the longer he's made to be the buffoon, the harder it will be for me to accept him as anything else.
Maybe this is the problem with the cast gelling as I would hope to see. Mary's character is written like a woman on steroids and Marshall's character is written like a mousy housewife. This is not an endearing dynamic. Marshall needs some cojones and fast. Sure, he can pine over Mary incessantly, but knowing he'd be capable of going for the full 8 second ride would make his character much more likable.
In the end, Mary makes a last-ditch effort to catch Raphael before he takes off on an airplane to Marlin training camp, but her run down car falters on a railroad track leaving her to push it out of danger. As rude and hurtful as she was to Raphael, I wouldn't have returned her calls either. Much like Marshall's character, I felt no chemistry at all between Mary and Raphael this week, even though she did make jokes about whether he wanted to be on top or use a cupcake in sex play. Knowing from the cast videos that Raphael will wind up having a fling with her sister, I already don't feel any compassion for Mary Shannon. Karma is, after all, a *itch.
I've said a lot of negative things in this review, but the show isn't as bad as this week's episode sounds. Perhaps I'm spoiled by the strength of other shows I've committed to. I just want to feel like my lover is at the very least TRYING to give me pleasure. Even though it was a good story, this week, "In Plain Sight" made me feel like I had to endure parts of it. I'm still along for the ride, but here's hoping next week the characters step it up a notch.moreless