| sesho2022 wrote: |
| More about quotes: Quotes should be short, not a whole scene. There should only be enough action in a quote to explain what needs explaining. Leave the rest out. A quote is about language, not the action or the meaning of an entire scene. The language should be memorable. You should think, I wish I could write like that--it's funny, or moving, etc. So just submit a quote if it's very interesting and keep it short. Sometimes one scene will give you a couple of quotes. You don't put them in one submission, just because they happened in the same scene. Hope this makes things clearer. |


