Disney Channel (ended 2007)
I know Steve Loter said Josh Mankey will not be back. But I have an idea for a season 4 episode. I posted this idea on ronstoppable.proboards89.com most of them liked it. Here is a more detailed version, now that I thought of the details.
Romeo And Kim - Kim gets the female lead in the school play, but Ron's trust is tested, when her leading man is old boyfriend Josh Mankey. Ron is jealing in this episode, and helping things as you expect is gossiping Bonnie, who is exploating Ron's jealous, in hopes of breaking up Kim and Ron.
Meanwhile Duff Killingen is up to something, and Team Possible has to stop him. The villain's plot is the B story to Kim and Ron's relationship.
Ok, this is an idea I have had in my head for a very long time...
A Little Dose of Evil ((or as I like to call it, "Chicken Noodle Soup With A Drakken On The Side" XD)): Just a whole (or a half) episode makeing fun of 24, showing what Drakken actually does during the day. Like... "the following takes between10:00am and 10:27 am. *shows Drakken screaming Shego's name over and over again* The following takes between 10:27am and 11:15am. *Drakken is still hollering for shego*
Drakken: SHEGO! SHEGO, GET DOWN HERE! SHE-
*Shego walks into room, looking all pissed off*
Shego: FOR PETE'S SAKE! WHAT do you want Drakken?!
*Drakken looks vindicated*
Drakken: Ah, there you are Shego! I just needed you to pass me the ductape, it's over there. *Drakken points to the tape that is all the way on the otherside of the room*
Shego: WHY YOU LITTLE- *shoots plasma at Drakken*"
I just always wanted to see something stupid like this happen, and I just love me some Doctor Drakken!!
Back in Business
This is a fanfic idea of mine, really, but it could be an episode.
In the wake of the Warmonga incident, Dr. Drakken finds himself rebuilding his empire from scratch. Having lost any remaining support from his mysterious benefactors* (as a result of Drakken trying to betray them with his "Operation Grande Size" in So the Drama**), Drakken has to learn to fend for himself to achieve his dreams.
Shego is still by his side, but only because she's still under contract with him for about one more year. Frugal Lucre and Camille Leon have also managed to score a so-called internship with him, much to Drakken's annoyance. Lucre, having escaped just so that he can get away from Motor Ed, becomes Drakken's ever-so-annoying financial advisor (and Drakken needs it, considering he's flat broke). Camille, on the other hand, desires some experience for her fledgling criminal career, and Drakken feels that she could be a useful ally. (She met Shego in prison between Trading Faces and The Big Job, and the two metahumans bonded as a result. Think a friendship along the lines of Harley Quinn and Poison Ivy).
Basically, it all focuses on Drakken's struggle with construction, finances, henchmen, and life. No Kim or Ron, except in a few consolation scenes.
*Drakken always has money trouble, and yet he's always got weapons, henchmen, and resources. Someone's gotta be giving him the stuff.
**Like any rightful villain, Drakken feels that he has to betray his allies. Too bad they didn't take the attempt lightly. Also, I made up the name of the Diablo plot to make it sound better.
|The money problem is fairly easy to solve: just say he got it all by selling his inventions that weren't designed to take over the world.|
I thought Drakken once complained that he never sells his inventions, and then someone else makes the same thing and steals his thunder. Also, since when did Drakken invent anything that wasn't a doomsday weapon (or ANYTHING, for that matter, since most of his stuff is "outsourced"). Drakken doesn't seem competent enough to get as far as he did in StD completely on his own resources. Bear in mind that this was a fanfic concept originally, so for the episode, there won't be any mention of "benefactors".
|The only problem I see with your idea is that there doesn't appear to be any conflict aside from the standard bickering that gathering all those villains together in one place would entail. It has to involve Kim and Ron somehow, or at least a plan to take over the world. Otherwise it's just not a compelling story. You've got a good start, but it needs more or it won't be convincing. Just something to think about.|
Well, basically, Drakken and his "pals", through much toil and strife, finally manage to scrimp and save enough for a decent lair and a doomsday weapon. However, Kim and Ron come in and destroy all their hard work, leaving Drakken back at square one. Basically, the episode is villain-centric, with Kim and Ron only coming in at the end. If it was an episode, it would probably be a 11-minute deal.
|Well, it just seems like it should be part of a much larger story. The format that would suit you best is a one-shot, since that provides a tiny little window into the lives of the characters.|
Well, I'll admit, I am more comfortable with one-shots than big stories. It's just more my style.
Well, I'll admit, I am more comfortable with one-shots than big stories. It's just more my style.
I know how you feel. Which is why I have a few unfinished fan fics, and why I have yet to write an Avatar: The Last Airbender fic, because it is dectated towards long story arcs. My last fan fic Between Jobs which I finished was only 4 chapters.
This one's an old one I made a while back, around the time the So the Drama came out. Since I can't copy and paste the summary I'll just have to retype it from memory. In my opinion my summaries kind of sucked to begin with anyway. So in a way it all worked out for the better!
Ron inadvertently gets kidnapped by a fleeing Drakken and Shego after helping Kim foil their latest 'Take Over the World' scheme. Kim's begins to worry as it proves difficult for even Wade to track down Ron's location for a rescue. Eventually Ron's absence becomes noticed, and Kim's anxiety only gets worse. Soon, however she receives help from the last people she ever would have expected: Tara, Zita, and Yori, all of Ron's former crushes. But against her better judgement at excepting their help, Kim's jealousy prevents her from accepting. But as time grows short for Ron, will Kim be able to overcome it and work together to save him?
And before you guy's say anything, let me say this. This episode idea does take place after So the Drama, so Ron and Kim are boyfriend and girlfriend. However! Tara, Zita, and Yori's action's does not mean they're trying to steal Ron for themselves from Kim. While they may not 'love' Ron like Kim does (to our knowledge at least) that still doesn't mean they don't like him. And as I've experienced first hand in the real world, you can still have feelings for someone even if they're already in a relationship. Although I'm not against other characters making comments about Ron's luck with the ladies! I mean that's just funny!
Oh, and I haven't come up with a title for this or any of my other KP Episode Ideas. So if you have any clever ideas please feel free to share
Here's a scene for my episode created by my friend jena911 when I first made this over a year ago. As such all credit goes to her I just did a bit of grammar work and nothing more.
(Tara, Zita, and Yori confront Kim at the Bueno Nacho demanding to aid her in saving Ron. Kim however has other ideas.)
Kim: I save Ron all the time, I don't need your help.
(Kim turns to walk away but Yori walks in front of her, blocking her path.)
Yori: You did not have us, and we only wish to help.
Kim: What part of "I don't need your help" don't you get?
Tara: The part where we don't get why.
Kim: I'm not gonna be able to save all of you.
Zita: You won't need to, we can handle saving Ron with you.
Kim: Let's compare shall we? I save world, Zita saves Vir-Tu-World, Yori saves sword and teacher, and Tara saves nadda. No offense.
Tara: Kim, we wanna help.
Kim: I don't need your help, so bye for the last TIME.
Yori: You are not leaving without us.
(Kim and Yori glare at each other. Both drop into a fighting stance.)
Kim: Bring it.
(Kim and Yori fight all over Bueno Nacho for several minutes, eventaully however Yori loses ground and ends up flat on her back)
Kim: Now, as much as I don't like fighting my friends, I hope that it's clear I don't need your help.
(Kim tries to walk out only to have her path blocked by Tara and Zita)
Kim: If you think I'm tired, I'm not. Now excuse me.
Tara: Kim, I know you can do anything, so why can't you accept are help?
Zita: Kung-fu girl may be down, but we can still take you.
(Kim backs up then makes a running flip over Tara and Zita )
Kim: Yeah, take away 3 minutes of my time, now don't follow me.
(Tara, Zita, and Yori follow Kim outside until Kim activates her jetpack and flies off)
Zita: Talk about boy crazy.
Tara: More like Ron crazy. Now what do we do?
Yori: Save Ron-san with or without Kim's permission.
Zita: We can't follow a jetpack or however Kim's getting Ron.
Yori: We can with her computer.
(Pulls out Kim's Kimmunicator)
Zita: How'd you get that?
Yori: In battle with Kim, she does not keep track of things well.
(Turns on Kimmunicator, Wade appears and is not looking at the monitor)
Wade: I got a lock on where Ron is.
Tara: Great Technokid, now where do we go?
(Wade finally looks at the monitor in suprise)
Wade: Yori? Tara? Zita? Why do you have me?
Tara (Whispering to Zita): How does he know our names?
Wade: Give me back to Kim.
Zita: No way, we're going to save Ron, no matter what Kim says, and you're the only way of doing so.
Wade: This is dangerous, you may not come back, Kim can handle it and I really...
Zita: Need to get back to Kim, so give us a ride and you go back to Kim.
Tara & Yori: Yes, please.
Wade: I could just send Kim a new one.
(Girl's faces fall in disappointment)
Wade: But I guess I can call a favor to M.C. Honey or Britina.
Zeta: M.C. HONEY!
Yori: Either will be fine.
Wade: I'll call the Oh Boyz and cover your ears.
(Yori does so)
(Tara and Zita jump up and down together)
Tara & Zita: THE OH BOYZ!!!!
So what do you guy's think?