Well, I like it. The cameos and build-up to the big slobberknocker were enjoyable, and I also like the scenes with Princess (who seems a lot sweeter in your works then she is in others) and Streaky and Ace and Hatchi. I was reminded of the JLU ep featuring Amazo. Btw, whose Chip? That name sounds familiar.
However, Nimbus and Beppo (well, CK's Beppo) are villains. Also, could you please indent your paragraphs? See, every time a new person speaks or a new paragraph starts, then you need to start a new sentance.
For example: After the doctor had gone, there was a knock at the door. A dumpy, short woman entered after the king invited her in. The governess of the king and queen's two children, Prince Tristan and the princess Morrigan, she respectfully bowed to the king, and began speaking.
"Your majesty, I've just put your son to bed. The lad is doing quite nicely; he is really quite a brave young man. I also peeked in on Morrigan. She's apparently gone to bed."
King Allan smiled briefly at the mention of his children. "Thank you, Mariel."
No offense, but I had trouble recognizing who was saying what at certain points and got confused. This is not a personal attack or a flame, and I honestly hope that you don't take it as such.