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This is a divisive person, struggling between present and past self.

Always felt titles fall picture portends.
Run out of ideas early clues.
Then he began to ask: What is the feeling of death?
He said, never want this again.
But he knew it was a curse,
They are alive, that is, with the desire to wrestle.
Like the women here changing hairstyles, suggesting self-transformation.
Long hair is given to women in this society ICON, Blonde is a traditional beauty PRONOUN.
Peggy get rid of too,
This is Betty.
Betty in the car like a watershed episode of vomiting, a virtuous Shukutoku housewife becomes independent and incisive.
But this time, he vomited.
Let a little unexpected twist.

Does this man being hurtled the endless abyss ?

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Jul 16, 2013
Hi Shirly, sorry if this seems rude but is English your first language? I find your posts fascinating but sometimes I don't understand them that well. This one, in particular I really like even though I can't tell if it's a poem, stream of consciousness or a quote from someone or something else. Great ideas either way.
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Jul 16, 2013
You're totally right. These are quite poetic.
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Jul 16, 2013
I know my English is not authentic.I'm sorry.:(
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Jul 16, 2013
I think what @ben45tpy is saying here is that since English is not your first language, you don't quickly depend on common idioms or mundane ways of expressing your thoughts. Because some of your phraseology is uncommon, it forces the reader to think about what you're saying...which often works to your advantage.

In that sense, I totally agree with him. Please keep it up.
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Jul 17, 2013
Thank you!I will!
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Jul 16, 2013
you shouldn't apologize Shirly! ben45tpy was saying how cool your posts are. i love them and would like to see more.
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Jul 16, 2013
Thank you vary much! I will try hard.
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