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    Raccoon1459

    [81]Feb 28, 2011
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    The First Date: Part 4



    It was now Saturday, and the big date finally came. Nemo, who held some flowers he planted for Pinch, walked towards his girlfriend's home. He knocked on the door, waiting for someone to answer. He showed how nervous he was by sweating all over the doormat and gulping. The door finally opened, and it was Wanda who answered it.



    Wanda: Are you alright, dear?


    Nemo: Yes ma'am, I'm just a little nervous. Is Pinch ready for our date?


    Wanda: Hang on, I'll see. Pinch, honey, Nemo is here.



    Pinch walked towards the front door and noticed the puddle of sweat on the doormat, as if it had been raining.



    Pinch: Did it rain, by any chance?


    Nemo: No, that's a sweat puddle, mine. Anyway, I planted some flowers for you.


    Pinch: Thanks, Nemo, they're beautiful! (Sniffs flowers.) Ooh, and they smell good!


    Nemo: And I packed us a picnic lunch.


    Pinch: Great!


    Wanda: Well, you two have fun.


    Pinch: Thanks, mom, bye!


    Nemo: See ya later!



    The two lovers made their way to a private, grassy area where they had their picnic. The two prepared the blanket and laid out the food. It consisted of PB&J sandwiches, chips, soda, and a couple of wine glasses that they could put their soda in. Without further delay, they finally ate and talked. After their meal, they relaxed and talked some more. Nemo sat on the blanket Indian-style, and Pinch laid on the side of her body. The young lovers were admiring the beauty of the day.



    Nemo: Isn't it beautiful?


    Pinch: Mm-hmm. I knew that today was the right day to this. It's almost as if God wanted this to happen, all for us.


    Nemo: I agree. God can do some amazing things.


    Pinch: Sometimes the beauty of nature can make you feel different. It can just take away the bad feelings and make you feel the good ones.


    Nemo: Wow, I never thought of it way. After all, I ama city raccoon. I never take the time to enjoy the finer things in life.


    Pinch: Well, now that you're living in the wilderness, don't you think you should?


    Nemo: Yeah, I really should. But I can never do it because I get so distracted by music and other stuff. But from now on, I'm gonna start taking the time to start enjoying this beautiful world of ours, and see what I've been missing.


    Pinch: That's great, Nemo.


    Nemo: And I'm gonna start right now. Would you care to take a walk in the forest with me?


    Pinch: I'd love to.


    Nemo: Then let's go.



    Nemo stood up and helped his girlfriend up, and the two of them put the picnic blanket, the wine glasses and everything else back in the basket. Nemo spotted a trashcan and the kids put their trash in there. They headed to the forest while holding each other's paws. Nemo was carrying the picnic basket in his paw, and Pinch carried the flowers Nemo picked in her paw.



    To be continued.








    Edited on 02/28/2011 7:00pm
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    ajena

    [82]Mar 1, 2011
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    WOW!!! What a date. So far, Pinch and Nemo are having a great time. Thanks for writing the next part. The fan-fic is getting better and better.


    Keep it up.

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    [83]Mar 7, 2011
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    The First Date: Part 5



    Pinch and Nemo walked in the forest, still holding each other's paws and carrying each others things. And as they look at the trees, animals and other amazing the forest had to offer, Pinch asked Nemo an interesting question about the possible future.



    Pinch:Nemo, if you and I ever get married, and I know it's gonna happen someday, you know what I'm gonna name our first baby?


    Nemo:What?


    Pinch:Bambi.


    Nemo:Bambi?!


    Pinch: What's the matter? Don't you like that name?


    Nemo: Sure I do, it's just that our baby will be a raccoon, not a fawn.


    Pinch: That's not the point! The point is the name we choose for our baby!


    Nemo: Let's sit down somewhere and talk more about this.



    The two found a log, sat on it and talked about their future baby's name. They hoped to reach an agreement on what to call it, but as of right now it didn't look like they were going to.



    Nemo: Look, Pinch, it's not that I don't want to name the baby Bambi, I'm very fond of that name, it's just that I think there are thousands of names just as good as Bambi.


    Pinch: Like what?


    Nemo: Well, some good boy's names would be Kenny, Seth, Christian, and Arthur. As for girl's names, some good ones would be Ruby, Lisa, Lola, Charlotte, and Sonya.


    Pinch: Those are some pretty good names.


    Nemo: Thank you.


    Pinch: I like Lisa.


    Nemo: Kenny sounds like a good name to me.


    Pinch: You know, now that I think about it, I'll think I'll put Bambi on hold.


    Nemo: That's a good idea. Hey, we reached an agreement!


    Pinch: Yes, we did!



    The two laughed, after finally reaching an agreement.



    Pinch: Come on, let's go back to my place so we can get my romantic movie and watch it over at your place.


    Nemo: Oh, that's right.


    Pinch: Don't worry, I have a feeling it's something you're really gonna like: Lady and the Tramp.


    Nemo: I can live with that. Alright, let's go.



    The two exited out of the forest and went back to Pinch's home.



    To be continued.











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    ajena

    [84]Mar 8, 2011
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    SUPER COOL!!!


    I enjoyed the part where the two raccoons laughed. Keep up the good work.

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    [85]Mar 15, 2011
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    The First Date: Part 6



    The two went up to Pinch's room, and found her Lady and the Tramp DVD on her bed. Pinch grabbed it and exited out of the room. They went downstairs, and accidentally bumped into her dad.



    Walter:Hi, kids.


    Pinch: Hi, daddy.


    Nemo: Hi, sir.


    Walter: Aren't you two supposed to be out on a date?


    Pinch: We are, I just had to come back and get my movie.


    Walter: Oh, okay. Are y'all having a nice time?


    Nemo: Yes, sir, we're having a great time.


    Walter: That's good. Well, I guess I'll see you two lovebirds later.


    Nemo and Pinch: Bye!


    Walter: Bye!



    The kids leave the houseboat and walk to Nemo's home. Scootch looks out the window, and finds Nemo and Pinch walking together holding paws. Pinch looked at her brother, smiled and waved at him. Scootch did the same thing. Pinch was feeling a little worried about Scootch, and Nemo could see the concerned look on her face.



    Nemo: Everything okay, Pinch?


    Pinch: Yeah, everything's fine.



    The kids finally arrived at Nemo's house. Nemo opened the door for his girlfriend, so she could get in, and Pinch gave him a thanks for being such a gentleman. Nemo told her she was welcome, and closed the door behind. Pinch put the movie in the DVD player, and Nemo made the popcorn. While the movie started, the two cuddled next to each, enjoying the popcorn and each other's company. Later on,during the middle of the movie, the most famous scene where Lady and the Tramp were enjoying a plate of spaghetti began, and this excited Pinch.



    Pinch: Ooh, I love this part!



    Just when the kissing scene was about to start, this Nemo the idea that maybe Pinch wanted to kiss him. Nemo was about to ask her, but then he put his paw on hers. Pinch stared at him.



    Nemo: Pinch, does this kissing scene make you wanna do anything?


    Pinch: I thought you'd never ask.



    While the title characters in the movie were enjoying being with each other, the raccoon kids were enjoying their's as well by pressing their lips against each other and passionately kissing. But the kiss ended quickly, because Pinch thought about her little brother again.



    Nemo: What's wrong?


    Pinch: I just couldn't help but think about Scootch. I feel kinda guilty for leaving him like this. I'm sorry, Nemo, but I'm gonna have to cut our date short.



    Pinch took the movie out of the DVD player, and walked to the front door.



    Pinch: I'll see ya later, Nemo.



    Just when she was about to leave, Nemo stopped her.



    Nemo: Now hold on a second. I just thought of something.


    Pinch: What?


    Nemo: Maybe if we do the Noodle Dance, we might find something for all three of us to do together!


    Pinch: It's worth a shot. Let's Noodle!



    The Noodle Dance music sequence and music began, and the kids danced with each other, trying to come up with an idea. The sequence and music ended, and Nemo got an idea.



    Nemo: I got it! How about if we take him to the movies?


    Pinch: Lake Hoohaw doesn't have any movie theaters, Nemo. And besides, we don't have enough money for the three of us.


    Nemo: Oh, yeah.


    Pinch: How about we take him to a baseball game?


    Nemo: The baseball season doesn't start till next month.


    Pinch: Oh, right. Hmm, this is gonna be harder than I thought. Wait! I remember Mayor Jeff saying that a carnival is going to be in town next weekend. Maybe we can him to that instead!


    Nemo: Great idea! Let's go tell him that we're taking him!


    Pinch: I love you, Nemo.


    Nemo: I love you too, Pinch.



    The end.



    Aftermath:



    Pinch and Nemo took Scootch to the carnival the following weekend, and the three of them we're glad that they finally did something together. Pinch, Nemo and Scootch had so much fun, that they agreed to do something next time when the time is right, Pinch promised to never abandon her little brother again.







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    ajena

    [86]Mar 16, 2011
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    Aw, what a sweet ending.


    You did it again, Raccoon1459. I loved your fan-fic.

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    Kris664

    [87]Mar 26, 2011
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    how about you guyd do a pb&j otter idea about peanut or flick being a secret agent
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    Raccoon1459

    [88]Mar 29, 2011
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    Kris664 wrote:
    how about you guyd do a pb&j otter idea about peanut or flick being a secret agent

    That would be quite entertaining.
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    ajena

    [89]Apr 24, 2011
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    HAPPY EASTER, PB&J OTTER FANS!!!Laughing

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    [90]Apr 27, 2011
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    ajena wrote:

    HAPPY EASTER, PB&J OTTER FANS!!!Laughing

    Likewise.
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    [91]Aug 9, 2011
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    Nemo Meets Ricky: Part 1



    A fan-fic written by ajena and myself.



    One afternoon at the Raccoon household, the phone rings and Pinch goes to answer it.




    Pinch: Hello?



    Ricky: Hi, Pinch, it's me, Ricky.



    Pinch: Hi, Ricky! How are you?



    Ricky: Good, and you?



    Pinch: Great!



    Ricky: Good! Listen, I'm coming over for a visit this weekend. Aunt Wanda and Uncle Walter already said it was alright.



    Pinch is feeling nervous because she has plans on Saturday.



    Pinch: (Gulps)This Saturday? Sound great, Ricky but...



    Ricky: But what? Is something wrong?



    Pinch: No, nothing at all! Listen, can I call you back later? Bye!



    Pinch hangs up the phone a breathes a sigh of relief. Just then, Scootch barged in, wondering why his sister was acting so nervous.



    Edited on 08/09/2011 1:37pm
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    [92]Aug 10, 2011
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    Nemo Meets Ricky: Part 2



    Scootch: Pinch, what's the matter?



    Pinch: Oh hey, Scootch. Nothing.



    Scootch: Was that cousin Ricky on the phone?



    Pinch: Yes.



    Scootch: What did he say?



    Pinch: He said he's coming to visit Lake Hoohaw this weekend.



    Scootch: (Excitedly) Why that's great! I haven't seen him for almost an year. I can't wait for him to get here. We will have lots of fun.



    Pinch: Uh...yeah. Will you excuse me for a moment? I need to make a phone call.



    Scootch: Sure, sis!



    Scootch exits the room and Pinch calls Nemo to cancel the date. At least she tried to.



    Nemo: Hello?



    Pinch: Hi, Nemo, it's me.



    Nemo: Hey, Pinch, what's up?



    Pinch: I'm afraid I can't go out with you this Saturday.



    Nemo: Why, what's wrong?



    Pinch: My cousin Ricky is coming over this Saturday.



    Nemo: But Pinch, I had such a great day planned. We could have a nice lunch at my house, go swimming, and maybe take a nice walk on the beach.



    Pinch seemed to like those plans.



    Pinch: Well, I guess I could go out with you, but just for a little while.



    Nemo: Great! Come to my house tomorrow, and we'll work out the plans, okay?



    Pinch: Okay, see you tomorrow.



    Nemo: Bye.



    Pinch: Bye.



    The kids both hung up the phone. Scootch waseavesdropping the whole, not liking that his big sister is going to see Nemo rather than Ricky.

    Edited on 08/10/2011 2:59am
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    Scootch: (Frowning and talking quietly) Aha. So that's why Pinch was acting nervous.

    Just then, he hears Pinch coming. He quickly hides behind a big plant. Pinch walks by and exits the house. Once she is gone, Scootch goes over to the phone and dials up a number.

    Scootch: Well, she'll be sorry she chose Nemo instead of Ricky.

    Ricky: Hello?

    Scootch: Hi, Ricky. It's me, Scootch.

    Ricky: Hey, Scootch! How are you doing?

    Scootch: I'm fine. How about you?

    Ricky: Same here.

    Scootch: Good. Ricky, listen. I know why Pinch was acting nervous when she talked to you on the phone.

    Ricky: Why? Please, tell me.

    So Scootch told Ricky what Pinch was going to do this Saturday. Ricky looked suprised and wasn't happy.

    Ricky: I can't believe it! I never knew she had a boyfriend.

    Scootch: Well, she met Nemo a few months ago. He is new to Lake Hoohaw.

    Ricky: I see. But she wants to spend time with him, rather than me and you!

    Scootch: I know. When Pinch was talking on the phone with Nemo, I was eavesdropping. She tried to cancel her date with Nemo, but I guess Nemo must have convinced her to not do it. And she did not do it.

    Ricky: What are we gonna do, Scootch?

    Scootch: (Smirking) I'll tell you what we'll do. We will sabotage their date.

    Ricky: (Also smirking) Why, cousin. That's a great idea. Buw how?

    Scootch: We'll think of something once you arrive in Lake Hoohaw. But once you get here, act as if you never knew what was going on.

    Ricky: Don't worry. I will.

    Both Ricky and Scootch chuckled meanly. And then said "bye" to each other and hung up the phone. Whatever they were going to do to sabotage Pinch and Nemo's date did not sound good.
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    [94]Aug 14, 2011
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    Later, Pinch came back in the houseboat, and noticed that her little brother was smiling as if he had something to hide.

    Pinch: Why are you smiling like that, Scootch?

    Scootch: Oh, no reason.

    Pinch: Anyway, I have something to confess: I'm going with Nemo on a date on Saturday.

    Scootch: You are?

    Pinch: Yes, and I need you to promise me that you won't tell mom and dad. If you do, they'll never let me see Nemo again.

    Scootch: I promise.

    Pinch: Thanks, Scootch, you're the best little brother a girl could have.

    She kissed her brother on the cheek and walked away to ask her parents if she could play with Jelly Otter.

    Scootch: (To himself.) However, I never promised that I wouldn't tell Ricky.(Chuckles fiendishly.)

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    It is now Saturday. Walter Raccoon sounds a loud honk as he pulls his recycling boat up to the dock for the Raccoon Family houseboat. On-board is Ricky Raccoon. Wanda, Pinch and Scootch are already outside of their house, waiting for Ricky to arrive. Ricky gets off of the boat, carrying a suitcase.

    Ricky: Aunt Wanda! Cousin Pinch! Cousin Scootch!

    Wanda, Pinch and Scootch: Ricky!

    Ricky runs up to his relatives and gives each of them a big hug.

    Wanda: Ricky, dear nephew. It's good to see you again.

    Pinch: We missed you so much.

    Ricky: I missed you guys too.

    Scootch: You must be exhausted after your trip.

    Ricky: Just a little.

    Walter: Let's go inside.

    They all agree and head inside the houseboat.
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    Walter, Wanda, Ricky, Pinch and Scootch are in the kitchen, eating barbecue fishsticks.

    Wanda: It's so kind of you that you are visiting us again, Ricky. We have been thinking about you almost every day, ever since your last visit.

    Ricky: Thanks. I kept thinking about you guys too. I missed you all so much.

    Pinch: We missed you too.

    Scootch: Yeah.

    Walter: We were all happy when we talked to you on the phone or when we received your letters. But now we are all more happy, now that you are.

    Ricky: Me too.

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    Later, after everyone finished eating, the family decided to relax in the living room.

    Ricky: That was good meal, Aunt Wanda and Uncle Walter. Thanks!

    Walter: You're welcome.

    Wanda: My pleasure, Ricky.

    Pinch: I'm gonna step outside to get some fresh air.

    Wanda: Okay.

    Pinch stepped outside and snuck over to Nemo's house to arrive for the date. About 10 minutes later, the members of the Raccoon family realized that Pinch never came inside.
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    Ricky: It's been 10 minutes since Pinch went outside. I wonder how much fresh air does she needs?



    Walter: What if she's a little ill?



    Wanda: Oh Walter, don't be silly. Maybe she needs a little privacy.



    Scootch: Right now? But cousin Ricky is here. We should all be with each other.



    Walter: Scootch has a point.



    Ricky: I'll go find her.



    Scootch: I'm coming with you!



    Ricky: Great idea.



    Ricky and Scootch exit the houseboat. They look outside, but Pinch is nowhere.



    Ricky: She's not out here.



    Scootch: (Frowning) I think I know where she went. Come on.



    They go off.

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    Scootch leads his cousin to a place in the woods where he's certain that his sister is located. Just then, they hear something.

    Scootch: Did you hear that?

    Ricky: Yeah, it sounds like talking and giggling.

    Scootch: It sounds like Pinch.

    Ricky: And it sounds like she's with someone. Come on, let's go check it out.

    We see Pinch and Nemo walking along the path in the woods, and we see Scootch and Ricky sneaking up on them carefully. After a while, the two lovers sit on a log, which was the exact same one from The First Date, and they relaxed and cuddled. Scootch guided Ricky to a bush where they wouldn't be spotted, and the two went inside it to spy on Nemo and Pinch.

    Ricky: Scootch, would you mind telling me what's going on? Who is that guy?

    Scootch: Ricky, you may not like what you're about to hear, but I think it's best if I tell you anyway.
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    Nemo: I love you, Pinch.


    Pinch: I love you too, Nemo. I love you so much.


    Ricky and Scootch still spy on them from a bush.


    Scootch: That guy is Nemo Raccoon. Pinch's boyfriend.


    Ricky: Nemo? Oh I remember now. You told me about him on the phone.


    Scootch: Exactly.


    Ricky: I can't believe Pinch! Right now she is spending time with Nemo, rather than me, you and your parents.

    Scootch: I know. This is not good.

    Ricky: Aunt Wanda and Uncle Walter know she is with Nemo?

    Scootch: No. She asked me to not tell them, or they would never let her see Nemo again. But she does not know that I told you.

    Ricky: You did the right thing, cous. Thanks.

    Scootch: My pleasure. Well, now that they are together, we should try to sabotage their date.

    Ricky: But how are gonna do that?

    Scootch has no idea either. He keeps pondering, then his face lights up with a smile.

    Scootch: We'll think of something if we do a Noodle Dance.

    Ricky looks puzzled.

    Ricky: A Noodle what?

    Scootch: A Noodle Dance. It's a dance that helps you to figure out problems. PB&J invented this dance and it's very useful.

    Ricky: Sounds interesting. How does it work?

    Scootch: I'll show you. Just follow me.

    The Noodle Dance music sequence began and Scootch started to dance and think at the same time. Ricky kept watching him, until he smiled and realized what he had to do. He joined Scootch. The sequence and music ended, and RIcky got an idea.

    Ricky: I got it! We could use an invisible spray to make ourselves invisible. That way, Pinch and Nemo won't see us and we can sabotage their date.

    Scootch: That might work. Do you have an invisible spray?

    Ricky: Not really.

    Ricky and Scootch: Hmm...

    Scootch: I know! What if I used a magic rot? With that thing, I can cast a spell on Pinch which will force her to come to us!

    Ricky: Good try, Scootch. But I don't think we have a magic rot.

    Scootch: Yeah, I guess you're right.

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