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Reba Fan Fiction by pashotshot

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    pashotshot

    [1]Jan 31, 2008
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    Mags' fan fiction inspired me. I've seen it, and it is great. I wanted to make one, and I'll give it a good shot. What do you think?
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    Mags313

    [2]Jan 31, 2008
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    Well, I'm not gonna lie, it is very time consuming, but I say giving it a shot won'thurt!
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    mitmfan78650

    [3]Jan 31, 2008
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    Yeah, give it a try!
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    fluffyrebafan

    [4]Jan 31, 2008
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    It would be interesting to see how you think the show would have carried on! Give it a shot, definitley!
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    kc2011

    [5]Jan 31, 2008
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    go for it
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    pashotshot

    [6]Feb 1, 2008
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    Thank you very much. I'll probably just might start it today. I was going to start it tomorrow, but I have support from several people, so I'll think of something, okay? I'm going to make it based on the kids that are on Reba.
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    mitmfan78650

    [7]Feb 1, 2008
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    Good idea, they need some plots!
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    kc2011

    [8]Feb 1, 2008
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    yea, it's something new
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    pashotshot

    [9]Feb 1, 2008
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    I found out in the series a pretty long time ago that the kids weren't on the show very much, so my fan fiction version of Reba will be based on them. It will be about their school experience, and their home experience.
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    pashotshot

    [10]Feb 2, 2008
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    This is from my first created episode, Henry's Kindergarden Experience:

    (Henry comes home from school)

    Barbra Jean: Hello, Henry.

    Henry: Hello, Mom.

    Barbra Jean: Had a good day at school.

    Henry: Yeah.

    Barbra Jean: Are you sure? You look sad.

    Henry: I am.

    Barbra Jean: Why? You shouldn't be. Jake, your half-brother, used to attend that school when he was your age.

    Henry: He's in middle school right now.

    Barbra Jean: Sit down. I'll fix you a snack. (looks in the refrigerator) So, why the puppy-dog face???

    Henry: I don't have any friends.

    Barbra Jean: Do you even try??

    Henry: Yeah. I tried my best.

    Barbra Jean: That's good enough for me.

    Henry: You say that all the time.

    Barbra Jean: I know, but I always mean it. (gives Henry his snack) Now, have your snack, and do your homework. (Henry startes leaving the kitchen for his room) Hey, Henry. (Henry stops) Keep on trying.

    Henry: I will.

    Barbra Jean: Soon, you'll get one.

    Henry: Okay.

    Brock: (enters the kitchen) I heard your conversation. I think you're getting better, and better in your parenting.

    Barbra Jean: Thanks, Brock.

    Brock: You're welcome, Barbra Jean. (hugs Barbra Jean) Now, I'm going to play golf with one of my friends.

    Barbra Jean: Too bad Henry doesn't have any.

    Brock: What? That can't be the truth. Henry doesn't have a school buddy?

    Barbra Jean: He sure doesn't. If he keeps on trying, he'll get one, eventually.

    Brock: Okay. See you tonight.

    Barbra Jean: Okay. (Brock leaves) My day gets better, and better.

    (theme song, then commerical)

    (The next morning, at Barbra Jean's house)

    Barbra Jean: Ready for school?

    Henry: Yeah.

    Barbra Jean: Have a good day, and remember what I said.

    Henry: I will.

    (At school, where Henry's at lunch conversating with another student)

    Henry: I always wanted to be a meteorologist when I grow up.

    Student: Just like your mom. I know your mom.

    Henry: You do???

    Student: Yes, I do. She's a good friend of my mom's. She visited her dentist store several years ago, and your dad checked her teeth.

    Henry: How was the check-up???

    Student: She had no cavitites. She saw some red-headed woman with a voice of an angel. Who is she?

    Henry: Reba. She's my baby-sitter. I'll tell her you said that. She'll be happy.

    Student: I'm sure she will. (starts to leave)

    Henry: Maybe, you, and I could be friends.

    Student: I don't think so, but tell your mom I said, "Hello."

    Henry: I will, bye.

    Student: Bye. (leaves)

    Henry: (puts his head on the table) This is not going to be easy.

    (Barbra Jean's house, in the living room)

    Barbra Jean: Did my idea work, Henry?

    Henry: No, but I still tried.

    Barbra Jean: Well, keep on trying, and you'll make friends in a hurry.

    Henry: (stops right at the stairway) I don't think so.

    Barbra Jean: Oh, come on. Such things happen when you're in Kindergarden.

    Henry: (looks at Barbra Jean) They do?

    Barbra Jean: Of course. When I was your age, I never had any friends until I was in the second grade. (thinking: I don't want Henry to know I had a growth spurt in the second grade that gave me the nickname of Blondzilla)

    Henry: (sarcastically) That was a sad story. (seriously gets sad) It may take me that long, too.

    Barbra Jean: I don't think it would. You're very lovable.

    Henry: (yells) NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! (gets out the door in a hurry, making Barbra Jean's jaw drop as low as she could drop it)

    (commerical)

    (Reba's house, where Reba, and Jake was playing video games together, both were sitting on the couch)

    Jake: I'm beating you, mom, I'm beating you.

    Reba: No, you're not. (laughs)

    Jake: I won!!!!

    Reba: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!

    (Henry walks in the door)

    Reba: Hey, Henry. If you really ran here. You might be able to run a mile as fast as Jake did a week ago. He did it in only five minutes, and fourty seconds, a school record. (Reba, and Jake laugh, and high-five, but Henry kept his composure)

    Henry: I've got to tell you something.

    Reba: Sure, you can tell me anything.

    Henry: I don't have any friends at school.

    Jake: I've got plenty. I'll let you meet them if I can get them home.

    Reba: Jake, take your video game, and play it upstairs.

    Jake: I will. Maybe Henry can play it while he's still here. (takes his video game, and goes upstairs)

    Reba: Sit down with me. (Henry sits on the couch with Reba) Talk to me.

    Henry: I don't have any friends at school. I tried for days, and days, but I can't get any.

    Reba: Do you know who he is yet?

    Henry: No, but he said he knew you, mom, and dad. He said you had a voice of an angel, and was red-headed.

    Reba: (laughs) I tell myself that all the time. But seriously, do you know who else had that experience?

    Henry: Who?

    Reba: Me. I had no friends when I was your age. Just when I lost confidence, I met a friend, and now he lives at your house.

    Henry: Who?

    Reba: Your dad. I had several other friends later on.

    Henry: You think I might have some friends later on.

    Reba: (chuckles) You sure will.

    Henry: I don't know what to do. I'm all out of ideas. I CAN'T DO IT ALONE!!! (falls on Reba, and cries on her shoulder)

    Reba: (hugs Henry) It's going to be okay. Just keep on trying, and you'll get one, okay?

    Henry: (still crying) Okay.

    Reba: (stops hugging Henry) Now, go home in peace. (Henry leaves the room) My day gets better, and better. (laughs hysterically)

    (At school, at lunchtime the next day)

    (Henry sits with the same student)

    Student: I thought about you, and I being friends.

    Henry: Really?

    Students: Yeah, I thought about it, and I think, you, and I can be friends.

    Henry: Thank you.

    Student: No, thank you. (goes to Henry, and hugs him)

    Henry: (stops hugging) So, what's your name?

    Student: Luigi.

    Henry: Well, Luigi, you have a good day.

    Luigi: You do the same. (leaves)

    Henry: YES! (pumps his fist, then regains his composure)

    (commerical)

    (Back to Barbra Jean's living room)

    Henry: Good news, mom.

    Barbra Jean: Yes, Henry.

    Henry: I made a friend at school.

    Barbra Jean: What's his name?

    Henry: Luigi.

    Barbra Jean: Luigi? You mean people are being named video game characters? Just kidding. The main thing is you made a friend. Have a good day. (Henry leaves, and Barbra Jean throws her hands in the air) THANK YOU, JESUS! (composes herself, hands still in the air, then walks off singing) Amazing Grace, how sweet the sound. . .

    (End of episode)
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    fluffyrebafan

    [11]Feb 2, 2008
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    That was really good! You should really keep writing.
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    pashotshot

    [12]Feb 2, 2008
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    Thank you. I'll probably do another one later on. Barbra Jean does her trademark, "Amazing Grace, how sweet the sound. . ." like she did on the show. That made me laugh when I was making it.
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    mitmfan78650

    [13]Feb 2, 2008
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    That was good!
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    pashotshot

    [14]Feb 2, 2008
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    mitmfan78650 wrote:
    That was good!

    Thank you.
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    pashotshot

    [15]Feb 2, 2008
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    This is the fan fiction of another episode I created. It's called, Dr. Henry and Player Jake:

    (on the last game of the hockey season)

    Reba: (with a camcorder in her hand) Just four minutes left in the hockey game, and it looks like that the All-Stars (Jake's Team) could go for a perfect season. They're leading 6-4 with no stopping them now. Jake is already near the goal ready to score another goal for his team. Here comes the rest of the players. Jake's ready to get the puck. It's coming, and so are the players. (screams like crazy) JAKE! GET OUT OF THE WAY! (the players crash into Jake) I hope he's okay. (Brock gets on the ice) Brock, who coaches the team, gets on the ice, and gets the star player, Jake. He looks like he's. . .hurt. . .again. Well, that's nothing out of the ordinary in hockey. After all. . .it's hard to keep your balance in hockey, and it's a hard contact sport. Well, off to get him home so that he can ice pack where he's hurt.

    (theme song, and commerical)

    (Reba's house, in the living room)

    Reba: (carrying Jake) Okay, Jake, you rest until we can get you someone.

    Jake: Okay, mom.

    Reba: How about you lay down on the couch? (put Jake on the couch)

    Jake: Sure.

    Reba: You get your hockey gear off while I get Henry over there. (leaves)

    Jake: Henry? He's going to watch over me? (door opens, Henry walks in, and closes the door behind him) This is not going to be good.

    (later)

    Reba: Hey, Jake, is everything okay?

    Jake: No. You got groceries.

    Reba: Yes, but kind ol' Kyra helped me out.

    Jake: I don't think having Henry here would help me out.

    Reba: Come again?

    Jake: I don't think this will work out. We have issues getting along.

    Reba: You should. (empties groceries) He's your half-brother.

    Jake: I know. (sits up) You got carrots.

    Reba: Yes. Kyra's got a Bugs Bunny-like appetite recently. If you need Kyra, and I, we'll visit Barbra Jean, okay?

    Jake: Okay, since she, and Kyra are your two best friends. (Reba laughs and leaves) Henry, has dad, and Barbra Jean approve of this, or have you done this before?

    Henry: I haven't done this before, but dad wanted to teach me how to be a doctor, so he wanted Reba to bring me here.

    Jake: Okay. (rain starts to fall) And it's raining. Well, at least it's not thundering. (thunder rolls) Henry are you still here?

    Henry: I'm hiding. I'm scared of thunder. I've already learned evacuation.

    Jake: Good for you. (thunder heard real hard, and electricity goes out, scaring Henry so bad he screams, scaring Jake off the couch)

    Henry: (scared half to death) Jake, are you still here?

    Jake: I'm here. (tries to get up) I wonder how the folks made it to your house. (once he got up, he tried to walk) Ow! (feels his hockey injury) This hurts, but I have to do this. (walks to Henry) Okay, I'll hold you. (more thunder, and Henry is scared big-time) It's going to be okay. (picks up Henry, and limps to the couch, still feeling his injury) I'm going to feel this in the morning. (electricity is back on) That's a miracle. (lays back down on the couch, Henry still hugging Jake) It's going to be okay, Henry.

    (door opens, and Reba, and Kyra is back)

    Jake: Hello, had a good time?

    Reba: Yes, we did.

    Kyra: Nothing like some time with Barbra Jean.

    Jake: Good.

    Reba: Is Henry scared of thunderstorms?

    Jake: Yes. We all have our fears.

    (Brock enters the door)

    Brock: Is Henry okay?

    Jake: Scared, but okay.

    Brock: Okay. (gets Henry) It's going to be okay. The weather's calming down.

    Henry: Okay.

    Brock: You're getting heavy, Henry. You might need to cut down on the meat. (leaves)

    Jake: Mom, come here.

    Reba: (sits down) Yes, Jake, what can I do for the hockey star?

    Jake: I think. . .(sniffs, and tears fall down his face). . .I'm beginning to love Henry.

    Reba: Good for you, Jake! That's what I love to hear. (hugs Jake, and Jake cries on her shoulder)

    (commercial)

    (still in Reba's living room, thunderstorm calming, but still going on)

    Jake: (all better) I think we'll ace the playoffs, if we'll end up with one.

    (Henry walks in the door)

    Reba: Hello, Henry. What are you here for?

    Henry: I want to see Jake.

    Reba: Jake's sleeping on the couch. . .and he's snoring (Henry, and Reba laugh)

    Henry: (finishes laughing before Reba) Okay, thanks. (goes to Jake) Wake up. I've got something for you.

    Jake: (wakes up) Was I snoring? I think I have a sore throat. (Reba laughs somemore)

    Henry: My mom wanted me to give you an ice pack for your injury, and your sore throat. (hands ice pack to Jake)

    Jake: Thanks, Henry. I love you.

    Henry: I love you, too. (hugs Jake)

    Jake: (still hugging Henry) This, I'm getting the hang of.

    (episode ends)
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    pashotshot

    [17]Feb 3, 2008
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    Well, am I not surprised? No responses. I like it like that. That saves posts.
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    fluffyrebafan

    [18]Feb 3, 2008
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    I'm sorry!!! I've been busy but I still love your fics! Keep on posting them!!!
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    kc2011

    [19]Feb 3, 2008
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    Yes, please keep them coming!!
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    [20]Feb 3, 2008
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    I agree!
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