srry wiht the drama i'm new to this but i think that you guys are doing a great job with this script. i think the whole quinn logan thing is really good but lets add a twist how bout something like this
lola is in her room and hears a knock on the door. its logan
lola: (confused)umm hey logan
logan:have you seen quinn anywhere
lola:no, but...... how was your date at time square
loganwalking in to the room) it was great but......
lola: but what?
logan: i mean quinn's great- she's hotter than i've ever seen her but she's just not the girl for me
lola:you wanna sit down and talk about it
so lola and logan are talking about their past relationships and then lola asked logan about what he sees in a girl
lola:so have you ever found anyone you might be in love with - besides yourself
logan: very funny well i'm looking for a girl that i can kinda catter to, but is still independent you
lola: really? you? looking for a girl like that
logan:i know its lame but its true
lola: you know what logan, i always thought you were a snob but your kinda sweet
logan: puking alittle don't you ever say that again
logan giggles and then stares at lola. lola stares back deeper
logan: you know you have very pretty eyes
well what do you think?!?!?
i g2g know but i'll write somemore 2morrow P3ACE